{"id":308,"date":"2024-11-28T17:48:13","date_gmt":"2024-11-28T17:48:13","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/et4g23\/?p=308"},"modified":"2024-11-28T17:48:13","modified_gmt":"2024-11-28T17:48:13","slug":"week-7-feedback-week","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/et4g23\/2024\/11\/28\/week-7-feedback-week\/","title":{"rendered":"Week 7 &#8211; Feedback week"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center has-background\" style=\"background-color:#dfdfdf\">This week I created a Game Overview &#8211; essentially a one page GDD to show Vanissa so that she could provide me with feedback. Overall I believe it went well and I was given valuable critiques that I can work on in order to improve my GDD.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The following is the feedback I received from my 15 minute feedback session:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Make it apparent who the target market is\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Who is the audience? 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