{"id":1361,"date":"2025-03-07T16:04:15","date_gmt":"2025-03-07T16:04:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/?page_id=1361"},"modified":"2025-03-23T12:36:33","modified_gmt":"2025-03-23T12:36:33","slug":"%e2%8b%86formative-feedback%e2%8b%86","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/%e2%8b%86formative-feedback%e2%8b%86\/","title":{"rendered":"\u22c6Week 7 – Formative Feedback\u22c6"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

10\/03\/2025<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Welcome to week 7 (Feedback week)<\/strong> it’s felt as though this has come around very quickly! <\/p>\n\n\n\n

I had my formative feedback on the Monday with Vanissa & Sophie, where they gave me some very useful feedback which I will include down below and also talk about how I’ve worked through some of the feedback given.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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One of my big tasks was to make sure everything was more organised and laid out in a more efficient way<\/strong>, as it was one of the comments that was made which would make it harder for them to mark. So before where I just had one long document of my work I have now split them into small chunks which can be found in the following links:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Mermaid Caf\u00e9 Exterior Ideas: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/mood-board-\u22c6-mermaid-cafe-exterior\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Mermaid Caf\u00e9 Exterior \u2013 Iteration 1: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-exterior-iteration-1\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 Exterior \u2013 Iteration 2: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-exterior-iteration-2\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Violet\u2019s Bedroom Ideas: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/mood-board-\u22c6-violets-bedroom\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Violet\u2019s Bedroom \u2013 Iteration 1: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6violets-bedroom-iteration-1\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Violet\u2019s Bedroom \u2013 Iteration 2: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6violets-bedroom-iteration-2\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 Ideas: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/mood-board-\u22c6-mermaid-cafe\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 \u2013 Iteration 1: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-iteration-1\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 \u2013 Iteration 2: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-iteration-2\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 \u2013 Iteration 3: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-iteration-3\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Creating A Colour Palette: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6creating-a-colour-palette\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

Mermaid Caf\u00e9 Evil Ideas: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6mermaid-cafe-evil\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n

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Another part of feedback was that I worked on was cross referencing my individual work to our group blog <\/strong>which will be seen throughout my work but also can be found here: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/violetsdates\/development-of-violets-dates\/sample-page\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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I’ve also made a change of making sure I only include work that is relevant to me within my personal blog <\/strong>and then extras in the group blog, an example being week 5 I initially included the whole feedback form but it was recommended that I only talked about feedback relevant to the environment\/narrative <\/strong>and then the rest goes into the group blog. Those changes can be found here: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/week-5-mandatory-playtesting-session\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/violetsdates\/playtesting-sessions\/<\/a><\/p>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n

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I made sure to document a meeting with Sophie<\/strong> better here: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6creating-a-colour-palette\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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There are still some feedback that I need to work through but for now this is what I’ve made changes too.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n

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Here were my tasks to try complete this week, I added taking a break as I’ve been working non stop for 7 weeks and I think it’s crucial to just have a slower week to just give myself a little rest before I carry on for the rest of this semester.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Not mentioned on there but I also started preparation for week 8 CRIT presentation <\/strong>by creating a shared google slides for our team to work on, more will be talked about here: https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/is3g23\/\u22c6week8-mid-term-crit\u22c6\/<\/a><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Another side task I started was filling in the group blog<\/strong> more, I tided the menus up<\/strong>, added our playtest<\/strong> & added our vertical slice<\/strong>. I’ve also started transferring some of my finalised environments over.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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