{"id":1243,"date":"2025-11-14T13:20:52","date_gmt":"2025-11-14T13:20:52","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/?p=1243"},"modified":"2026-01-15T22:53:19","modified_gmt":"2026-01-15T22:53:19","slug":"feedback-and-reflection","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/2025\/11\/14\/feedback-and-reflection\/","title":{"rendered":"Feedback and Reflection"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Feedback that I recieved based on my three game ideas presentation:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>It&#8217;s difficult to understand the gameplay of Idea 2, I should make a prototype to demonstrate it clearer and make sure that it is playable and fun<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Idea 1 seems to be the strongest idea but it needs more development and a firmer idea of what form this game could take<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Since I want to do comics after University, I should try to tie an idea to comics, idea 1 would be best for this<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>I could do idea 1 in the form of a choose your own adventure comic<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>With a smaller scope, it could be possible to do idea 1 as a video game on my own (since I plan to work on my own) either using Unity or Ren&#8217;Py, maybe by using interactive comic panels akin to the Pilgrim comic DLC for Cult of the Lamb<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-group is-nowrap is-layout-flex wp-container-core-group-is-layout-8f761849 wp-block-group-is-layout-flex\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"674\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-674x1024.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-1333\" srcset=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-674x1024.png 674w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-198x300.png 198w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-768x1166.png 768w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image.png 843w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 674px) 100vw, 674px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" width=\"1024\" height=\"559\" src=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-1024x559.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-1337\" srcset=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-1024x559.png 1024w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-300x164.png 300w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-768x419.png 768w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-1536x838.png 1536w, https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/6\/2025\/11\/image-3-2048x1117.png 2048w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Idea 3 was the weakest idea and not much direction<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">On reflection, I think that the feedback was generally positive and gave me valuable ideas for how I would continue in my development. I had the most positive feedback for idea 1 and I am therefore inclined to pick this idea for the game idea, although I think I need to further develop both ideas 1 and 2 before I can be sure of which idea I want to pick.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-buttons is-layout-flex wp-block-buttons-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-button has-custom-width wp-block-button__width-100\"><a class=\"wp-block-button__link has-white-color has-black-background-color has-text-color has-background has-link-color wp-element-button\" href=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/2025\/11\/18\/three-game-ideas-presentation\/\"><strong>THREE GAME IDEAS<\/strong><\/a><\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Feedback that I recieved based on my Project Proposal Presentation:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Clear and cohesive aesthetic direction<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>I need to better define the mechanics of the comic and how it is gamified, like puzzles &#8211; what sets it apart from other graphic novel adventures<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Replayability and how does failure work<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>clarify the narrative further &#8211; important since it is a comic, timeline key plot points<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Further develop the worldbuilding, how does magic work in this world + effect it<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Based on this feedback, I think that it is imperative that I try to timeline my narrative and define the gameplay clearly so that I have a solid foundation for next semester. This will include further worldbuilding development, ensuring that all the aspects of my game will be cohesive and immersive.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-buttons is-layout-flex wp-block-buttons-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-button has-custom-width wp-block-button__width-100\"><a class=\"wp-block-button__link has-white-color has-black-background-color has-text-color has-background has-link-color wp-element-button\" href=\"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/2026\/01\/15\/final-idea-presentation\/\"><strong>PROJECT PROPOSAL PRESENTATION<\/strong><\/a><\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Feedback that I recieved based on my three game ideas presentation: On reflection, I think that the feedback was generally positive and gave me valuable ideas for how I would continue in my development. I had the most positive feedback for idea 1 and I am therefore inclined to pick this idea for the game [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":7,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[24,22,19,16],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1243","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-blogs-project-proposal","category-project-proposal","category-semester-1-year-3","category-year-3"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1243","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/7"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1243"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1243\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1459,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1243\/revisions\/1459"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1243"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1243"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wsagames.com\/ob6g23\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1243"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}